Internal Vs. External Characterization (2.2.1) - Module 7: Creative Writing & Expressive Forms
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Internal vs. External Characterization

Internal vs. External Characterization

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Introduction to Characterization

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Today, we’re discussing characterization! Can anyone tell me what they think 'characterization' means?

Student 1
Student 1

Isn't it about how we describe characters in stories?

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Exactly! Characterization involves how we develop, present, and portray characters. It can be divided into two main types: internal and external. Let’s start with external characterization. Can someone give me an example of something we might observe about a character externally?

Student 2
Student 2

How they look, like their clothes or facial expressions?

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Great! External characteristics include appearance, actions, and mannerisms. Now, who can explain what internal characterization might be?

Student 3
Student 3

It relates to what they think and feel, right?

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Exactly! Internal characterization reveals a character's thoughts, values, and emotional states. It's important because it helps readers understand a character's motivations. Remember, we often use a mnemonic to help with this: **APPEAR** - Actions, Personality, Emotions, Attitudes, Reactions, and Secrets. This covers both internal and external aspects. Everyone got that?

Student 4
Student 4

Yes, we've got it!

Diving Deeper into Internal Characterization

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Now that we know the definitions, let's dive deeper into internal characterization. What do you think are some key elements we can explore for internal characterization?

Student 1
Student 1

Maybe their fears or desires?

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Exactly! Internal experiences like fears, desires, beliefs, and values are all key to making a character relatable. For example, if a character fears failure, their choices and actions are influenced by that fear. Can anyone think of a character from a book or movie who embodies this?

Student 3
Student 3

What about Harry Potter? He's scared of being like Voldemort but also wants to be brave.

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Excellent example! Harry's internal struggles drive many of his decisions throughout the series. Remember, the more we can show these traits through the character's thoughts and actionsβ€”rather than just telling the readerβ€”the richer our narratives become. Let’s practice: can anyone think of a situation where a character's internal conflict led to an important decision?

Student 4
Student 4

In my story, my character had to choose between following her dreams or satisfying her family's expectations.

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Great! Personal dilemmas like that can really deepen characterization.

Exploring External Characterization

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Moving on to external characterizationβ€”this gives us a window into how characters are perceived by others. Can anyone share an example of how external traits can hint at someone’s internal state?

Student 1
Student 1

If someone is slouching and wearing dark clothes, it might show they are sad or upset.

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Absolutely! External traits often serve as visual cues to a character's emotional and mental state. Remember, many readers draw interpretations from a character's actions or speech as well. How can we show a character's emotional turmoil without explicitly stating it?

Student 2
Student 2

By showing them clenching their fists or avoiding eye contact!

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Exactly! Using body language and actions can effectively convey inner feelings. Using our earlier mnemonic, let's not forget how 'APPEAR' hints toward these cues, too. Let's finish this session by creating a character sketch where we detail both internal and external traits.

Student 3
Student 3

That sounds fun!

Combining Internal and External Characterization

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Now that we've discussed both internal and external characterization separately, how does combining these two enhance our storytelling?

Student 4
Student 4

It gives readers a full picture of the character!

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Right! When we show both internal motivations and external actions, the character feels more lifelike. How can we implement this in our writing?

Student 2
Student 2

By including thoughts while also describing their actions at the same time?

Teacher
Teacher Instructor

Spot on! Think of it this way: when you write, let internal thoughts provide context to external actions. For example, if a character is seen helping someone while internally questioning their motives, it adds depth. Let’s brainstorm together a scene to practice blending.

Student 1
Student 1

I have an idea!

Introduction & Overview

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Quick Overview

This section delves into the distinction between internal and external characterization in narrative writing, highlighting their roles in developing complex, believable characters.

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Understanding internal and external characterization is crucial for creating multi-dimensional characters. Internal characterization involves a character's thoughts and feelings, while external characterization involves their appearance, actions, and behaviors. Both types work together to drive character development and narrative engagement.

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Internal vs. External Characterization

This section explores the essential concepts of internal and external characterization within narrative writing, vital for developing rich and believable characters.

Key Concepts:

  • Internal Characterization: This refers to the hidden aspects of a character, including their thoughts, beliefs, fears, desires, values, and personality traits. Internal characterization allows readers to understand what motivates a character and why they behave in certain ways.
  • External Characterization: In contrast, external characterization encompasses observable elements such as a character's appearance, clothing, actions, mannerisms, and how they interact with others. It provides the audience with tangible information about the character’s identity and state of mind.

Significance:

Both internal and external characterization are crucial in crafting multi-faceted characters that readers can relate to or understand deeply. When well executed, they contribute to a compelling narrative that maintains excitement and emotional engagement. Writers are encouraged to blend both forms for a profound impact, as they serve complementary roles in character development.

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Understanding External Characterization

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External: What a character looks like, how they dress, their observable actions, mannerisms, and habits.

Detailed Explanation

External characterization refers to the visible traits of a character. This includes their physical appearance, clothing style, and the actions they take. For example, if a character is described as tall, wearing a suit, and has an energetic demeanor, these characteristics give readers a clear visual picture and imply certain personality traits, such as professionalism or confidence.

Examples & Analogies

Consider a new student in school. If they're wearing a bright yellow jacket, have neatly combed hair, and greet everyone with a smile, we can quickly form an impression of them being cheerful and approachable, even before knowing their personality.

Understanding Internal Characterization

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Internal: What a character thinks, believes, fears, desires, their values, secrets, and core personality traits. Stress the importance of showing both.

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Internal characterization dives into what runs through a character’s mind. It reveals their thoughts, feelings, values, and fears, providing depth beyond their outward appearance. For instance, if the same character from the previous example is anxious about fitting in, that inner conflict adds a layer of complexity, allowing readers to understand their actions and motivations more deeply.

Examples & Analogies

Think of a friend who always seems confident on the outside but struggles with self-doubt internally. Their external behavior might give the impression of a tough exterior, but understanding their inner fears provides a richer view of who they are.

The Importance of Combined Characterization

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Stress the importance of showing both.

Detailed Explanation

Both internal and external characterization are essential for creating believable and relatable characters. When a character's external traits align with their internal beliefs and motivations, it creates a cohesive and engaging personality. If a character who appears confident is internally battling insecurities, this duality can create tension and relatability, helping readers connect with them on multiple levels.

Examples & Analogies

Think of a superhero. They might wear a bright costume and save people bravely (external), but privately, they might worry about being alone or failing their loved ones (internal). This combination makes them more human and relatable, despite their extraordinary abilities.

Key Concepts

  • Internal Characterization: This refers to the hidden aspects of a character, including their thoughts, beliefs, fears, desires, values, and personality traits. Internal characterization allows readers to understand what motivates a character and why they behave in certain ways.

  • External Characterization: In contrast, external characterization encompasses observable elements such as a character's appearance, clothing, actions, mannerisms, and how they interact with others. It provides the audience with tangible information about the character’s identity and state of mind.

  • Significance:

  • Both internal and external characterization are crucial in crafting multi-faceted characters that readers can relate to or understand deeply. When well executed, they contribute to a compelling narrative that maintains excitement and emotional engagement. Writers are encouraged to blend both forms for a profound impact, as they serve complementary roles in character development.

Examples & Applications

A character who wears dark clothing and has slumped shoulders, hinting at sadness (external), while internally battling fears of inadequacy.

A confident character who speaks eloquently in public (external) but struggles with self-doubt privately (internal).

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Internal's thoughts, external's sight, together they make characters right!

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Stories

Imagine a character named Nora who seems confident on stage (external) but often worries alone in her room (internal), showing her complexity.

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APPEAR: Actions, Personality, Emotions, Attitudes, Reactions, and Secrets to remember characterization aspects.

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Acronyms

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Character Internal thoughts

Traits External actions.

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Glossary

Characterization

The process of creating and developing characters in a story.

Internal Characterization

Refers to the inner thoughts, emotions, values, and beliefs of a character.

External Characterization

Refers to the observable traits, actions, and outer appearances of a character.

Multidimensional Character

A character that displays complexity and depth through both internal and external traits.

Motivation

The reasons behind a character's actions or behaviors.

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